A Controlling relationship leads to an untimely death however, the presences on the controller appears and makes an attempt to consume Ava's life.
In order to give audiences an insight about what my trailer is going to be about I have complied clips from existing films within my genre to explain my narrative and to explain to my target audience what my film is going to be about and how I intend to go about filming it.
Audience feedback on my pitch:
Within my class today we went round and looked at everyone's 25 word pitches and give them feedback.Based on the feedback I receive I am going to act on it to improve my pitch in order to make it clear to my target audience if they are unclear about anything they see.
What went well?
- My peers said,'Clear sense of narrative'.
- and 'a Clear sense of genre'
However it can be improved by?,
- It's unclear who this potential movie is going to be targeted at therefore, it needs to become clear as to what certificate it is.
- Maybe develop the existing clips a bit more to show a more developed idea of what I want my final trailer for,'Ava' to look like.
Based on this feedback I will add and develop to my 25 word pitch... take 3:
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