A2-Media

I have made the changes due to my feedback on my first draft and above as you see is the result:

This is the second draft to my trailer.Taking the feedback from my first draft of my film trailer and adapted it to produce this version.I have increased the amount of eye catching shots at the increase the enigma  about what the films about and therefore make people want to watch the rest of the trailer.Within my trailer now I have also picked up the amount of music used throughout my trailer and added an extra bit in to add a shock and creepiness to my trailer.Within the second draft of the trailer I have also decreased the amount of title shots I originally had as it was just to much for the audience to read and also it made what narrative I was trying to establish confusing and bewildering to the audience.

I order to now start to bring the production of my trailer to a close I will start to make sure my promotional package ties all together nicely so my film,'Ava' will have a promotional package just like the professional films do in the industry.

I now plan to ask a wider audience by creating survey's and questionnaires and handing them to a wider range of people in order to get a broad opinion and then taking the feedback and make the final tweaks.