My Magazine:
- Barcode is blurry
- Weird line around Empire
- Pictures in film tape boxes have white lines around them
- Picture behind cover lines is blurry
- Text for coverlid is a bit bland
- Avatar feels a bit out of place of my magazine
- Headlines don't really relate to film.
- Relate the writing inside the circle more to horror.
Movie Poster:
- Red eyes edges need straightening
- 'A film by Charlotte Green' Maybe rephrase it to 'From the director who brought you' or 'The producer of'.I could maybe even try to move these to different locations on my poster as it might fit somewhere a lot better,
- Credit Block-I need to look more accurately at a credit block on a professional film poster.
- The red of the water needs softening around the edges.
- There's a stage bar down the sides of the poster.
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