First rough cut-Trailer


This is the first sought cut of my trailer the feedback I received for this was:

  • There are way to many transitions,It's to much for the audience to read therefore people could lose interest in the trailer easily.
  • The 'waterworks productions' is in the wrong place and it never says presents that more seen in movies.
  • The dialogue at the start does not need to be included and it's quite hard to hear him.I will discard this clip because I agree.
  • The title does not appear to fit in with the rest of the Ava fonts and looks I have used on my ancillary products.
  • I the nightmare scenes there is a odd transition:looking back I see this was done by mistake as it was not intended to be on there.When placing the transition it must have jump from the shot before it.
  • The sound should flow a bit more smoothly.
  • The title slides at the end are far to long and the font does not match the fonts I have used on my ancillary products.

Lotty Green

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