Changes made in my trailer
Narration:The theme of the letter coming through a mysterious box has been lost as once a gathered these shots i thought the footage was quite weak in itself and the box did not stand out in the shot as much as i was hoping.Even when I then did the shots in a tighter frame something just didn’t feel right about it.I felt the shots where bland and ineffective therefore I adapted this idea to show how my main protagonist is in communication with her dead lover.I did this by focusing more on the rise en scene and have actually planned to cover an entire wall in notes that were originally in the box.I felt this picked up the pace in my trailer and also made it more visually appealing.
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